Autumn Poem

I composed a poem about autumn when I was walking home from school, in about 5 min. Of course, I revised and edited it, later on, but still... I think that that is a pretty big accomplishment for me, since I usually don't write poetry, and if I do, it is usually written in hours, not minutes. I think that this is pretty good, at least for me, so let me know what you think! Well, here goes nothing! Wish me (or my poem) luck!

Autumn

When the leaves change colors

The wind begins to blow

The apples ripen

For frosty snow

When the birds begin to nest

The flowers start to die

When the weather turns cold

In the brisk autumn sky

The leaves begin to fall

And dew becomes frost

When rain turns to snow

Summer is lost

When water becomes ice

The wind turns cold

The fires are lit

And stories are told

When the grass starts to sprout

The sun begins to shine

Flowers start to bloom

And love blossoms fine

The weather turns hot

The sun fails to set

Cold is wanted

And people start to fret

When the leaves change colors

Everybody knows

Autumn is coming

And the world seems aglow